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The greenest eyes, the sweetest smile, We'd often sit and talk a while, About music, films and things we'd seen, We even shared our crazy dreams, You truly were my sweetest friend, I thought you'd be there till the end, You made me say that I loved you, And even though that still is true, I know that you don't feel it too, For me that is the biggest shame, I only wish you felt the same, So many wasted years, Kept apart by silly fears, And then one day by sheer fate, I said I loved you but you felt hate, I'd shown my feelings oh so late, Even though hard I tried, Your love for me had long since died, You didn't feel the same as me, But couldn't give me honesty, And so I sit all alone, Staring at a silent phone, Even though my life is barren, You will always be my Darren. |
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@i.am.reign | 18 May 19 | |
To give context to the last line, Darren is my crush's crush.
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@9362 | 19 May 19 | |
Nice but I would try and rewrite the last line. Gives the impression that you are missing a boyfriend called Darren
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@i.am.reign | 19 May 19 | |
That's why the reply, for the person I wrote about it's clear, for anyone else it looks the way you say, but what's written is written
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