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adaab , salam , namaste . Hello . . Urdu adhab pe pehle se bohat se topic mojood thaye , new topic ki koi zaroorat to nahi thi . Mager meine ye mehsoos kia ke jahaan shairy likhi ja rahi hay wahaa,n pe iqtebas nahi , nazam ya gazal to afsana ya kahani nahi . Or sub se ehm bat jo honi chahiay wo hay radh e amal . . Sub action ho raha hay . . Kaheen b reaction nahi . .bazm e adab mein na sirf apko sher likhne ki . Ya iqtebas paish kern ki ejazat hay , uske sath sath aap kisi ki , tehreer pe behs bhi ker sakte hein . . Tareefun ya tanqeedan ! . Mager !!!! . Adhab ke sath . . Shukria . |
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 |
ibteda mein hi ker deta hoon . Faiz sahib ka aik sher hay .IK FURSAT E GUNAH MILI WO BHI CHAAR DINN . DEKHE HEIN HOSLE MEINE PERWER DIGAAR KE .
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 |
faiz sab ki shairy or unki zindagi ke mutaluq bohat kuch likha or kaha jata raha hay . . Tanqeedn or tareefun bhi . Us se qata nazer . aik bat jo faiz sab ke haq me hamaish rahi wo ye thi ke aap ke fan , apke madha, ne apko kabi mujrim nahi mana . ye aik bohat badi bat hoti hay ke jub kisi ko adalat e wakt bhi mujrim karar de to awaam uske sath khadi ho. Payar kerti ho ! . Aisa kiun ? . . Shaid iski wajah faiz sab ka wo kalam tha jis ko hamisha awan ne saraha . . . Mager jab is sher ki bat hoti hay to kia kaha jaaye ?
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 |
awaam ne . ,
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@mastkuri | 9 March 10 |
khoobsurat topic start kia hai kamran aapne umid karti hoon keh is topic ke tawasut se hamain bhohat kuch seekhne ko mile ga.
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@mastkuri | 9 March 10 |
Gulon mein rang bhare baad-e-naubahaar chale Chale bhi aao ke gulshan ka kaarobaar chale Qafas udaas hai yaaro saba se kuchh to kaho Kahin to bahr-e-Khuda aaj zikar-e-yaar chale Kabhi to subah tere kunj-e-lab se ho aaghaz Kabhi to shab sar-e-kaakul se mushakbaar chale Bara hai dard ka rishta yeh dil gharib sahi Tumhare naam pe aaenge ghamgusaar chale Jo hum pe guzri so guzri magar shab-e-hijraan Hamaare ashk teri aaqbat sanwaar chale Maqaam Faiz koi raah mein jacha hi nahin Jo kue yaar se nikle to sue daar chale |
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 |
wah . Bohat ache . . Shukria kuri . Apke topic pasnd kerne ka . . . Gulo me rang bhare bad e nau bahar chale . Chale bhi aao ke gulshan ka kar o bar chale . . Kia kehne . . . Faiz sab ke . . Or mehdi hasan sab ke . . Ye galzal ab mehdi hasn ki ho ke reh gai hay .faiz sab ki nahi rahi . Bohat khoob !
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@ajnabii | 9 March 10 |
wah janab kia baat hai Itne khoobsurat topic ko shuru karne pe mobarak baad qabool farmaiye hazrat.
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 |
ajnabi bhai bohat nawazash. credit to mehez apko jata hay iss liay apko bhi mubarak!
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@xxkamixx | 11 March 10 |
ism e be musamaa ism e ba musama se to aap wakif hi hoon gaye or jo iska matlab nahi jaante wo DIPTY NAZEER EHMAD ke navol padh lein, maloom ho jaye ga . iss ke ber akss ISM E BE MUSAMA se apka taraf hum kera dete hein . duniya mein qaleel ter arsa e qayaam mein humara sabqa bade bade naamo se pada lekin haram hey , inn mein se aik bhi apne naam ki khasoosiyaat per poora utra ho, chalein yahaan tak bhi darust hay ke naam ke muafaq na sahi, lekin naam ke mukhalif to na hoon. thehrein sab , baat aise apko samajh nahi aaye gi !!!kuch amli misaalein paish kerta hoon. go raaz ki baatein hein phir bhi batata hoon faraz. ibteda apne ghar se kerni chahiaye ( yaad rahe ke apno ki baat kerte huay zara aqraba perweri ka kuch muzahira bhi kerna padta hay, kiun ke aaj kal zamane ka chalan hi kuch aisa hay ) lehaza !!!! baat apne 1st cosin se shuru kerte hein jin ka naam FAYAZ hay. |
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@xxkamixx | 11 March 10 |
nam ke ber aqss , aaj tak unn mein fayazi wali koi baat nahi dikhaai di. doosroo.n per lugana to door ki baat apno per kharach kerna bhi asraaf jante hein mosoof. 25saal se lee jane wali tankha or ikhrajaat ka hisaab unki jaibi diery mein dekha ja sakta hay. sadqa fiter lena apna pedaaishi haq samajhte hein. or hum se chheen jhapat ker bhi le lete hein ke falaa,n ko dena hay. mager !!! sahab kahaa,n ? ,,sirf aik dafa ka ziker hay (un ki direy mein ) ke aik mazoor shakhs ko uss ki intehaai ahh o zaari ke badh 2 rupay de baithe . uss ke badh se mazkoora waqe ka aisa aser lia ke ab dil ke mareez hein or uthhte baithte uss mazloom ko mghallzaat ke tohhfe bhejte rehte hein lekin apne elaaj per rupya lugna bhi janab ke nazdeek gunahh e kabeera hay. sabat ye hua ke , fayaz , kajooso.n ke chief of staf hein. isse urff e aam mein ISSM E BE MUSAMAA kehte hein. nahi ayaa apki samajh mein ? |
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@xxkamixx | 11 March 10 |
misaal munber 2 dekhiay !! AAQIL , humare dost hein. ap innhein humara nadaan dost bhi keh sakte hein. kuin ke aaj tak mossof ki aqal ki waja se jo nuqsaan humko uthaane pade hein , uski tawaqo hum ko dushmano se bhi nahi thi, or ye hazrat unnjane mein pohncha gaye. janab ko kuch raqam ki zaroorat thi, aik sufaid ba raish admi , jo 5nch wakat namazi thay or muhalae mein jinka totee bilta tha, unn se kuch bhalle logo ne AAQIL ko qarz e hasna ke tor per kuch raqam dilwa di , or return mein dawat ka mutalba kia ! dawat to unnho ne khoob khilaai !!! muhalay mein mash_hoor ker ker dia ke , dawat ki soorat mein ye log SOODH khate hein. or baraish sahab inn soodh khoro ke sarghanna hein . baat itni badhi ke namaazio.n ko muhala chodna pada , or aaqil sab ye kehte rahe ke dekha !!! suche hote to aise bhagte ? hum ne kaha ke unko raqam to lota do! kehne luge bhagte chor ki lungoti hi sahi tumare pait mein kiun dard ho raha hay . hum apna se mu.n le ke reh gaye . aik bar train ke safer ke doraan ticket officer ne ticket manga to kehne luge , abba ke pas hay . uss ne poocha ke abba kidher hay ? aaqil ne ber jasta jawab dia , udher berth per late hein , per unnho ne kon sa ticket lia hay , jo tum check kero gaye ? ticket officer ne bade mia ko masnooi neendh se be daar kia , or jurmana adaa kerne ke liay kaha ! phir kia hua ?!!!! wo ghul ghupada hua , ke khuda ki panah, aik hajoom aktha ho gaya. railway police bhi mangwa li gayi lekin jurmana to door ki baat , bade mia ne , mein na maanu ke musadiq , aik paai bhi adaa na ki or ghar pohanch ker , AAQIL mia ki jo thukaai hui us ki cheekein saare muhale ne sunni. isse kehte hein ISSM E BE MUSAMAA !!! nahi samjhe aap? |
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@ajnabii | 11 March 10 |
HABIB JALIB
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@ajnabii | 11 March 10 |
By Syed Junaid Ahmed Like the years before, Habib Jalib's death anniversary went by unnoticed. No one, not even his great admirers did anything to commemorate the sacrifices of this spokesman of the deprived class. Keeping in view such attributes of our society Jalib Sahab has rightly noted: Ab rahen chen sey be dard zamaney waley So gaey khuab sey logon ko jaganey waley |
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@ajnabii | 11 March 10 |
Jalib Sahab was one of those rare few who fought selflessly for the rights of the awam and mazdoor. It was due to these untiring actions that he was unanimously declared Shair-e-Awam.
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@ajnabii | 11 March 10 |
It's a pitiful tradition, on part of us Pakistanis that we forget the services of our benefactors. We only remember and pay tributes to those whose services are rewarded by state authorities or the establishment. And this is only because we are not aware of the price paid by those not in Islamabad's good books.
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@ajnabii | 11 March 10 |
Jalib Sahab was always the one who was persecuted by governments due to his boldness, righteousness and courage. He faced many detentions and hardships but he could not be deviated from his uprightness. It was his firm adherence, which didn't allow him to compromise on his principles and ideologies, and compelled him to say that, Logon pey hi hum ney jaan wari, ki hum ney unhi ki ghumkhwari Hotey hain to hon haath qalam, shaair na banaingey darbari |
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@ajnabii | 11 March 10 |
Habib Jalib staunchly believed in his ideologies. He had dedicated everything including his family in the struggle against social and economical injustices, oppression, despotism and exploitation.
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@ajnabii | 11 March 10 |
He always perceived a system of peace and justice for the people. A system that did not deny basic human rights to all of its citizens. He in caped his entire philosophy of life in these verse: Khet waderon se le lo Milain luteron se le lo Mulk andheron se le lo Rahey na koi a'ali jah Pakistan ka matlab kia laa ilaha illalah |
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@ajnabii | 11 March 10 |
An ardent believer of truth, Habib Jalib was the proponent of complete honesty and expressed truth when state functionaries considered it a sin. While following the attribute of truthfulness he was faced with several types of mental and physical punishments, including expulsion and imprisonment. However, instead of doing any harm to him, these excesses played a vital role in the reinforcement of his thoughts and ideologies.
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@ajnabii | 11 March 10 |
Such keh kay kisi daur main pachtaye nahin hum Kirdar pey apnay kabhi sharmaye nahin hum Zindan ke dar-o-boam hain derina shanasa Pohnchey train sir-e-dar to ghabraey nahin hum |
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