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I feel as if my heart has shattered, shattered and scattered all over da cold hard floor,it's as if a sword is piercing my side,piercing and piercing,constantly tearing through my flesh,leaving me wounded and sore,i am hurt,my emotions have been stabbed,my heart can't take this pain anymore,cold droplets run down my pale cheeks,i hate feeling dis way,i hate being hurt and unaccepted,my heart is tired of being stabbed by dis cruel world,tired of being constantly hurt and abused by people's nasty comments,i don't wan't to be crushed by da weight of dis bad world,im tired of dis pain of rejection,my heart yearns for love and acceptance... |
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@carynxxx | 31 May 08 |
this poem is truly a work of art. i can relate to the emotions and rejection in dis awesome ode. keep writing, u rock.
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@evilgirl | 4 June 08 |
Thanx alot carynx x x I realy appreciate dat!
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@zigzat | 11 June 08 |
Wow exquisite a masterpiece
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@evilgirl | 14 June 08 |
Tanx zigzat dat means alot!
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@elli | 15 June 08 |
i liked your poem. its moving ..
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@evilgirl | 17 June 08 |
Tanx elli it means alot..!
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@kellyb | 18 June 08 |
evil girl do you have to reply to evry1 who says your poems good bt any way congrats uve outdone yourself
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@evilgirl | 18 June 08 |
Lol tanx kelly ..n i lv thankin ppl 4 takin da tym 2 read n comment on my wrk
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@kellyb | 23 June 08 |
hey evilgirl long no time no hear i was expecting another hit poem from you!!
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@evilgirl | 23 June 08 |
I wil definately put another poem up soon n i wud luv 2 c sum poems of urz so plz dnt b shy 2 put another 1 up
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@zonna | 1 July 08 |
Yr poem is really gud. Whn u write sumthn dat moves so many ppl... (Cant find da rit word 2 finish)
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@evilgirl | 8 July 08 |
Tanx zonna ..i enjoy writin poems dat apply 2 alot of ppl
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@9362 | 8 January 10 |
What a brilliant poem!
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@filifulu | 2 February 10 |
Trust me i read this n tears almost filling the 2nd cup. I lyk dis
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@poet786 | 24 February 10 |
I like :)
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