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@souless | |
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Watch me burn watch me bleed watch me kill the need. Watch me cut watch me slice. Watch me add some spice. Watch me cut out your heart watch me rip it apart watch me end your life watch me lick your blood from my knife watch me rip into you watch helpless theirs nothing you can do but watch me see me watch... |
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@emo_lez | 7 June 08 |
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I c wer u were tryna g0 wit dis p0em. .bt da sentece structure jst need alil mre wrk. Nd maybe a diff ending.
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@souless | 7 June 08 |
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Yea. It was a piece of cr*p. Haha. Gotta work on it more.
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@vampire6 | 8 June 08 |
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Haha no itz nt cr*p jst the endng cld use sme mre imagnry dark.sht
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@lucretia | 10 June 08 |
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... See me watching you* could also have worked...
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@emo_lez | 11 June 08 |
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Yeah i lyk dat. Gud j0b lucretia
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