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teary eyed quivering soul as she lays drenched in her lost innocence she awaits the darkness to take her away for belonging she does no more |
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@fanking | 6 April 11 |
I really like this. . .
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@dyke | 8 April 11 |
thanx alot my life inspired it
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@nuqi | 12 April 11 |
Great opening and finishing.Well not its not just that, the brief splice between poignancy and a longing for an apocalyptic end has revealed that indeed terseness revives the quality of a work well done.Thus its perfect!
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@dyke | 12 April 11 |
thank you so much
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