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Ocean waves groove to the beats And tones of an unspoken breeze, Like whispers it all fades to silence, Life drifts silently with a heart untouched I wonder how it ever can to this When sweetness became too sweet And when life gave me its best, I closed my eyes and lost it all. Dazing in whirling reflections Of the inner ache That gains life when I have no mind to kiss, No moon to hold and no heart to keep, I wonder how it can to this Beat down like unwilling drums A heart beat has never been this numb Crushed in the essence of its core My mind has never been this lost Still I wonder how it came to this. |
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@dyke | 12 April 11 |
amazingly beautiful there are tears rolling rolling down my cheeks automatically wow nugi is all i can say WOW WOW WOW
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@nuqi | 13 April 11 |
Thanks....I'm glad you liked it.
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@fanking | 16 April 11 |
Yah. . .wow. Really good piece. What is your group nam on hi5.
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@nuqi | 16 April 11 |
Hello?Thanks.The Hi5 group is called Serious Lovers of Poetry.Its administered by Ajit, a great poet with over 20years of experience and a good friend too.Have u joined Hi5? |
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@fanking | 17 April 11 |
you are welcome. I joined hi5 |
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