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As night breaks, My life begins to crumble And all hope fades to dust, I knock on heavens door Hoping for hells angel to ease my sorrow, Now and forever i hope she comes tomorrow. Thoughts far beyond this life Encroach my mind, its shadow I must follow. My dead heart beats thump, Lifes promise will never reign, Deep breaths relinquish this mindless cancer, Like fallen hail, my heart has sunken Beneath this heathen soil, Spoiled with grief this lifes bliss Is tainted with the solemness of days. The hell raiser sees his rise As the blade divides my torsal, The warmth of my scarlet rinse Is forever lost, like death life is forever lost, And Iam too. Note: pardon the lack of single quotation marks, prodigits does not allow such characters. |
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@goth_lov | 30 November 11 |
Wow that's good :O sry shy or I'd say more |
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@nuqi | 1 December 11 |
Thanks Goth!Don't be shy...feel free post/comment as you please anytime, its always a pleasure to read poems and have a listen to what others think.Thanks Again.
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@fanking | 30 December 11 |
wow, I don't think you have ever written a poem I have never liked. You are a good writer.
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@nuqi | 31 December 11 |
Thanks Chris..nice to see you here, please keep writing.
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