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adaab , salam , namaste . Hello . . Urdu adhab pe pehle se bohat se topic mojood thaye , new topic ki koi zaroorat to nahi thi . Mager meine ye mehsoos kia ke jahaan shairy likhi ja rahi hay wahaa,n pe iqtebas nahi , nazam ya gazal to afsana ya kahani nahi . Or sub se ehm bat jo honi chahiay wo hay radh e amal . . Sub action ho raha hay . . Kaheen b reaction nahi . .bazm e adab mein na sirf apko sher likhne ki . Ya iqtebas paish kern ki ejazat hay , uske sath sath aap kisi ki , tehreer pe behs bhi ker sakte hein . . Tareefun ya tanqeedan ! . Mager !!!! . Adhab ke sath . . Shukria . |
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 | |
ibteda mein hi ker deta hoon . Faiz sahib ka aik sher hay .IK FURSAT E GUNAH MILI WO BHI CHAAR DINN . DEKHE HEIN HOSLE MEINE PERWER DIGAAR KE .
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 | |
faiz sab ki shairy or unki zindagi ke mutaluq bohat kuch likha or kaha jata raha hay . . Tanqeedn or tareefun bhi . Us se qata nazer . aik bat jo faiz sab ke haq me hamaish rahi wo ye thi ke aap ke fan , apke madha, ne apko kabi mujrim nahi mana . ye aik bohat badi bat hoti hay ke jub kisi ko adalat e wakt bhi mujrim karar de to awaam uske sath khadi ho. Payar kerti ho ! . Aisa kiun ? . . Shaid iski wajah faiz sab ka wo kalam tha jis ko hamisha awan ne saraha . . . Mager jab is sher ki bat hoti hay to kia kaha jaaye ?
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 | |
awaam ne . ,
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@mastkuri | 9 March 10 | |
khoobsurat topic start kia hai kamran aapne umid karti hoon keh is topic ke tawasut se hamain bhohat kuch seekhne ko mile ga.
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@mastkuri | 9 March 10 | |
Gulon mein rang bhare baad-e-naubahaar chale Chale bhi aao ke gulshan ka kaarobaar chale Qafas udaas hai yaaro saba se kuchh to kaho Kahin to bahr-e-Khuda aaj zikar-e-yaar chale Kabhi to subah tere kunj-e-lab se ho aaghaz Kabhi to shab sar-e-kaakul se mushakbaar chale Bara hai dard ka rishta yeh dil gharib sahi Tumhare naam pe aaenge ghamgusaar chale Jo hum pe guzri so guzri magar shab-e-hijraan Hamaare ashk teri aaqbat sanwaar chale Maqaam Faiz koi raah mein jacha hi nahin Jo kue yaar se nikle to sue daar chale |
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 | |
wah . Bohat ache . . Shukria kuri . Apke topic pasnd kerne ka . . . Gulo me rang bhare bad e nau bahar chale . Chale bhi aao ke gulshan ka kar o bar chale . . Kia kehne . . . Faiz sab ke . . Or mehdi hasan sab ke . . Ye galzal ab mehdi hasn ki ho ke reh gai hay .faiz sab ki nahi rahi . Bohat khoob !
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@ajnabii | 9 March 10 | |
wah janab kia baat hai Itne khoobsurat topic ko shuru karne pe mobarak baad qabool farmaiye hazrat.
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@xxkamixx | 9 March 10 | |
ajnabi bhai bohat nawazash. credit to mehez apko jata hay iss liay apko bhi mubarak!
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